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Writing
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English
Department Louisiana Tech
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Examples
provided
by James Katowich
Definitions taken from
the St. Martin's Handbook, 5th edition
| Misplaced
and Dangling Modifiers
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| Misplaced
modifiers are
words, phrases, and clauses that cause ambiguity or confusion because
they are not close enough to the words they modify or because they
seem to point to words before or after them.
Examples
include the following:
- My
parents bought a house from a man with no inside plumbing.
- The
characters find a jewel in the story by Maupassant.
- My
dog was hit by a truck running across the road.
- I
heard my kid outside with the dog yelling and laughing.
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| Dangling
Modifiers are words that modify something
which does not appear in the sentence; therefore, they often seem
to modify something that is suggested or implied but not actually
present in the sentence. They frequently appear at the beginning
of sentences.
Examples
include the following:
- Leaking
in several places, the scouts abandoned their tents.
- Dressed
in a silk nightgown, he thought his wife looked sexy.
- After
reading the article, the meaning became clear.
- While
working for B&W business, writing is the most common communication.
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| Limiting
Modifiers (only, almost, just, merely,
simply, even) can also be placed ambiguously and confuse readers:
For Example:
People
who use drugs frequently suffer health problems
Vs.
People who frequently use drugs suffer health problems
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